Flight 109 - Destination: First Love [Chapter 4]

[jmonogatari]

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Ah, this one is hard to write. First of all, I have to do a lot of homework since I am a relatively new fan and have to get their timelines straight to continue writing this! So if I made some mistakes, please let me know and I'll see what I can do :) Second of all, my RL hasn't been giving me any free time lately. So please do

Comments

[laurene123]

i'm kinda loving minako x jun right now. :) totally love the cute mail of nino and jun at the end.

[jmonogatari]

Ah I'm glad that u love them :) me too, actually, she's interesting and fun to write.

[projectgap]

Hello! Congratulations on your new fic! *kira kira~*

It had a good start, I loved the first chapter, the irony of the two flying at the same time XD

And is it safe to say that Nino is going to be in this fic as well? As in NinoxJunxOC? (it would be awesome if he is! Nino is soooooo adorable at the end XD)

This OC is very strong too! Sakurai Sho indeed! XD The chemistry between the OC and the Jun character is funny and attractive. Makes me want to know more about her :)

Have I ever told you that you have an amazing sense of humour? XD

Oh! And the patience is virtue line came out in the last fic too! =D

There's something different about the style of this fic (compared to on off screen).... can't put my finger on what it is yet, but it's definitely good.... something about the words.... :-/ (sorry if im confusing you, because im confused here as well XD)

Will follow up more closely from now! I've been a very bad fan of your writing, but I'll step up now! =D

[jmonogatari]

Ah thank you :) you've arrived to here already! :)
Thank you for the beautiful comment :) It really means a lot. And you notice that recurring domyouji line :p
The retort that Jun said in the first fic was said by Minako here ('domyouji is a baka, how come people listen to him') XD

Anyways, about the style, no, no you are not confusing me. Is it the 3rd person narration style and how sometimes the narration is more knowledgeable than the characters? (is there a word for this? some smart way of calling it? XD) I mean I only use this style here and not on/off screen which uses 1st person narration from both Jun and Rei. In the end it turns out to have a darker/more serious tone? Okay, I am not supposed to analyze my own fic XD LOL I am experimenting with these, so I hope it didn't turn out weird or too heavy. But yeah, I got a hunch that this fic is a bit heavier than on/off.

Aside from that, well I also have the airplanes and clouds (which looks more like UFOs) here :D

Thanks again for your comment, and oh you are stepping ip *wink

[projectgap]

Ahah! 3rd person p.o.v!!!! So that's what it was!

Haha, thank you so much for clearing it up for me, now I can rest peacefully :)

About this fic being heavier than on/off, its expected i guess, because it's the story about the first broken love which created a shadow that lasted for 7 years.

And it might just be me, but the way the story is going points to the direction of Matsujun growing stronger onto Rei, mostly because of Minako's sudden appearance. I have this wierd image of Minako being the glue to Jun & Rei XD

[jmonogatari]

LOL XD You're right, the tone is heavier because of that in the first place. And about Minako being the glue, I think it makes a lot of sense. Jun wouldn't be the Jun (well at least in this story) he was when he first met Rei because of his experience with Minako..

But it is so sad to be Minako, eh?

[jmonogatari]

That would always be his first question, eh? XD

[tenshii_chan]

late :(

tsk. i wonder why i didn't see this on my inbox? tsk.

anyway, that was such a long update, but its worth reading. hehehe. i enjoyed reading it that i spent 15 minutes reading this one.. haha :)

[jmonogatari]

Is it a long one? LOL
Thanks for reading it and glad that you enjoyed it :) I'll see you in next chapters :)

[mikaa22]

Waah! I love it already! :D
Honestly speaking, I'm not so fond of Rei. Gomen ne. Haha.
But Minako on the other hand, I soooo love her!! Strong personality, quirky and fun. Two thumps up. Love her! :D

Ohh, I remember this from the previous fic.

"Patience is a virtue, Domyouji-sama once said," Mao-chan joins in with a sincere smile to Minako.

Minako sighs, "Domyouji is a baka, how can anyone listen to him?"

Ne, it was the exact words Jun said to Rei..... hmmmm.

Thank you for sharing this, will be stalking you! :)))

[jmonogatari]

Can I be honest with you? Me too! LOL
And I was stuck writing her for 24 chapters when I realize her character is so bland by the 5th chap! LMAO

They are two different characters tho.. Which result in two different kinds of relationship for Jun.. I guess that's all I can say for now

Yes the exact words are intentional :)

And thank you for the intentional stalking. I love stalkers :)

[mikaa22]

Haha! I see. XD IMO, Rei is a bit needy. I guess I'm the type who like independent girls more. That's why Minako instantly grew on me. XD

Yeah, you'll hear more from me, for sure. XD

[jmonogatari]

But usually guys fall for that type of girls more than the independent ones. Sad but true XD