Fic: Five Christmases (and some of the times in between) part 3b/3

Jan 06, 2012 19:10

Title: Five Christmases (and some of the times in between) Part 3b/3
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Ship: Leslie/Ben
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~11,700
Summary: What the title says. An AU in which Ben and Leslie first meet on Christmas Eve, 3 and ½ years before Ben is assigned to audit Pawnee City Government.
Notes: The Holiday Fest is over, and now ( Read more... )

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sullen_aquarian January 7 2012, 02:49:42 UTC
So glad those crazy kids worked things out. For half this chapter I kept thinking, be fair Leslie! Ben doesn't want to hurt Pawnee! And then I'd think, be fair Ben! Leslie really loves Pawnee!

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jncar January 9 2012, 00:17:43 UTC
Thanks for reading the whole thing. I'm glad you enjoyed how it all turned out. :)

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stars_inthe_sky January 7 2012, 04:11:46 UTC
All of the warm fuzzies! ALL OF THEM.

(And not just because I'm wearing a bathrobe and sitting on a heating pad.)

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jncar January 9 2012, 00:18:36 UTC
Holiday fics have to have warm fuzzies--it should be a law. Glad I could deliver for you. :) Thanks for reading and commenting.

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hpchickadee January 7 2012, 04:34:36 UTC
What a wonderful story, beginning to end. It really just made my heart sing. ♥

I remember reading the first chapter on the night it was posted and thinking that it was simply magical. Just perfect for Christmas, and a really sweet depiction of soulmates meeting by chance. Loved it. (And I'm sorry I didn't comment on it then...I have a habit of reading the entire story and commenting on the whole.)

But finishing it up tonight, I was really struck by how well-written it was. I loved the storyline, but what I enjoyed most was how you wove canon and AU together so seamlessly; the use of verbatim dialogue from the show, not necessarily aligned with canon, but always perfectly-placed, was a fantastic touch.

Can you tell I loved this? Because I loved this. Great job!

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jncar January 9 2012, 00:19:29 UTC
Thank you so much. I really appreciate your sweet comments, and I happy you enjoyed reading my story. :)

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isalsayourface January 7 2012, 07:26:43 UTC
This was just so lovely! I really liked how you realistically integrated canon into this story, too. So glad it all worked out in the end!

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jncar January 9 2012, 00:20:02 UTC
Thanks for reading the whole thing. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)

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lunamystik January 7 2012, 13:41:03 UTC
<3 this fic so hard! It's definitely one of my faves in the fandom... great job!

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jncar January 9 2012, 00:20:34 UTC
Aww! So sweet!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it. :)

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