Fic: Witness Protection, part 7/12 (?)

[jncar]

Title: Witness Protection, part 7/12(?)
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~5,500
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness

Comments

[isalsayourface]

So glad to see this story updated! I love how you are mixing/merging/playing off of canon, yet making it totally FIT with your storyline. It makes sense and flows nicely - it definitely doesn't read as if you are trying to "force" canon into your story. (I may have already praised you for this in a previous comment...if so, you are CONTINUING to do an awesome job at this.)

There are so many lines that I liked, but this one: The suckage might even continue on until the winter. That line made me smile so hard. :D

And Jerry with the wine coolers - HA!

Excellent job!

[jncar]

Thanks :)

[sullen_aquarian]

First, I must ask: what is bagua? I know what bagna cauda is, and what baguettes are, but not that.

I really loved how you wrote Chris--it sounded just like him. But I fear he's going to throw a wrench into Ben and Leslie.

Great to see this tonight!

[sullen_aquarian]

It's a feng shui term -- remember in the Indianapolis episode when Chris wanted to adjust Ann's bagua and then rearranged her living room?

[jncar]

The anon commenter covered the bagua thing (everything I know I learned on wikipedia).

And I'm actually having fun writing Chris, so I'm happy to hear that you like it. Thanks!

[saucydiva]

I was so excited to see this again, and it didn't disappoint. Love Ann's salad confession, and Ben getting everyone to brainstorm ideas, and Andy, always Andy. And that Chris/Andy friendship, with Ben noticing Chris edging towards Andy when Andy was talking to April? Very sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter, because this is one of my favorite WIPs.

[jncar]

Thanks so much. I do love Andy, and I'm glad to hear you think I'm doing him justice.

[niki525]

These stories are not great for my employer... Totally read all parts today, and now I can't wait for the next chapter.

[jncar]

Thanks!

[spunkyar]

I love love love this story! Their feeling for each other are everything I imagined they were feeling at the beginning of season 3. Well your Leslie has come around to Ben a little quicker though, but how can she not when he's being so perfect. You've done a great job of making this alt universe different then the show, but also very believable. Also that opening scene of Ben not being able to help but think of Leslie while he's in Indi watching the fireworks and around flirty women is so sweet and adorable. I can't wait for more of this story!! The next 4 weeks until Leslie can make her move need to hurry up!! :)

[jncar]

Thanks so much :-)