Fic: Witness Protection, part 9/13

[jncar]

Title: Witness Protection, part 9/13
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~7,800
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness Protection

Comments

[americnxidiot]

Man, the tension in this fic. I just want to smush their faces together, flu and witness protection program be damned lol. I love how they talked it out here, and I love how Ben was open (as much as he could be), and the only real misunderstanding right now is that they each don't realize how much the other likes them. Sigh, I love this story.

Oh and Andy. I really love Andy hah :)

[jncar]

Thanks--writing the tension is so much fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[greenshouse]

Oh this fic gives me so many feelings. Absolutely adore that they finally got to talk things out, albeit in a flu induced haze.
Ben's thought process during the chamber of commerce presentation was just so perfect, and I love how you addressed Chris and Ann's relationship. So much tension in it all, I'm finding myself just yelling at the computer to just kiss and talk about everything!
Can't wait for part 10!

[jncar]

Thanks for reading. I'm having as much fun writing the tension as you are reading it.

[sullen_aquarian]

I really enjoy how you're weaving the AU elements with canon. Man, I wish Ben could tell Leslie the truth--hopefully before the story's over!

[jncar]

I love fitting the canon bits into my new scenario. Thanks for reading.

[stillscape]

Glad to see this continue. I know I haven't managed to comment on all of the chapters, but I continue to be impressed at all the interweaving of canon and AU--especially the Andy stuff, in this chapter. And the Harry Potter wand! You probably know how hard I ship Leslie/Harry Potter references.

[jncar]

You probably know how hard I ship Leslie/Harry Potter references.

Don't we all? ;-)

Thanks for reading.

[angelica_rules]

i love love love this. like leslie loves waffles. i love how you are still using the details from the show but making something completely familiar but different! can't wait for the chapter. and they should make out like now.

[jncar]

Thanks so much. I love weaving the canon details and my new stuff together. I'm glad you like it.