Fic: Witness Protection, part 11/?

Jul 07, 2012 16:25

Title: Witness Protection, part 11/?
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~6,300
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness ( Read more... )

witness protection, parks and rec, fic

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sullen_aquarian July 7 2012, 22:43:15 UTC
Great AU twist on Harvest Festival. I know it's not canon, but yay for a handshakey-thing origin scene. But you must resolve all this angst soon. So Part 2 ASAP, please.

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jncar July 9 2012, 18:48:17 UTC
Thanks! But you may be disappointed on the "resolving of the angst" front, because the next few chapters will come bearing truckloads of angst. Sorry - I can't help myself.

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sullen_aquarian July 10 2012, 01:06:29 UTC
Thank you for the warning, though I can't promise I won't whine about it : ).

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saucydiva July 7 2012, 23:07:09 UTC
Oh man, Chris and Ann ending things just as Ben and Leslie are damning the torpedoes? Ben breaking the agreement he and Chris just made? Chris finding out Ben and Leslie kissed? But then has HAS to trust Ben anyway because who else is there? God. This is just too much to handle. So many lies and half-truths bouncing around.

"They do tend share most personal information with each other." made me laugh really hard, and I can't even explain that.

(fist bumps are always awesome. 100%)

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jncar July 9 2012, 18:49:16 UTC
Even I am having trouble keeping track of all the lies, and I'm writing the darn thing! Thanks for reading <3

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americnxidiot July 7 2012, 23:29:10 UTC
Ughhh this story kills me in the best way. The tension is insane, and you write the longing between them so well. I love Chris being willing to go along with Ben because the alternative of not trusting Ben would be so much worse. I love Ann and Leslie bonding over their similar frustrations. Thank you for updating and so excited to read more :)

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jncar July 9 2012, 18:55:06 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm really happy that people like what I'm doing with the Chris/Ben relationship in this story, because that's the part I was least confident about when I first started writing.

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jncar July 9 2012, 18:55:27 UTC
Working on it! Thanks for reading.

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bowlsohard July 8 2012, 00:10:11 UTC
Oh you beautiful rule breaking moth. I am late because I had to read this chapter before leaving my house! Love this story. Love your description of Ben kissing Leslie.

"His mouth moved against hers as if she was the only thing in the universe that mattered-as if everything would implode into nothingness if he didn't get enough of her right that instant."

So good!

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jncar July 9 2012, 20:31:25 UTC
Thanks!


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