Fic: Witness Protection, part 12/?

Jul 12, 2012 16:11

Title: Witness Protection, part 12/?
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: R (This chapter only. The majority of the story remains PG-13)
Word Count: ~11,200
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they ( Read more... )

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americnxidiot July 12 2012, 22:49:02 UTC
We have to wait 4-6 weeks!! Nooo. Okay, I'm kidding, because this chapter was great.

I am so impressed by how you play the two different tensions in Leslie and Ben's relationship against each other: the sexual/romantic tension and the tension caused by Ben's backstory.

And I love that once they opened the flood gates by finally kissing two chapters ago, it wasn't easy to shut them again. They can't just flip a switch and go back.

And then Ben and his mom? Siiigh.

Thanks for updating!

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throwingpens July 12 2012, 23:32:35 UTC
"The mayor was probably a Death Eater."

If the hometown of Voldemort is eagleton, the mayor of Atlanta is definitely a Death Eater.

I love this and I like you, even if we have to wait for the next part.

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shornt July 13 2012, 00:40:00 UTC
Goodness, this fic. I have to echo Rachel's reply -- there's these two threads of tension and I love how we have that drama of Ben's real life mixing with their romantic tension, that Leslie thinks the battle is one thing but Ben is dealing with so much and they make stupid mistakes with each other but cant help it and oh god Ben's mom, I really just can't wait for more, and I'm sure it'll be worth the wait!

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kyrieanne July 13 2012, 01:26:44 UTC
I finally got a chance to get caught up on this fic and I'm so glad I did. You've navigated the various tensions really well - they are in character with the show and the AU-verse you've created. And I love the tenor of their friendship...it seems very real.

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lizinstereo July 13 2012, 02:03:39 UTC
Wow, you have really upped the ante. I love how you are weaving the two threads of Ben's career drama and Leslie/Ben's relationship together. I loved the backstory you crafted for Ben and his mom. Really enjoyable and I look forward to the next part, whenever you finish it!

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