Fic: Consolidation in Seven Parts, the rest of it

[jncar]

Here's the first part

Comments

[corsaged]

I love, love this so much.

Loved that missing scene in Citizen Knope. :') All the Ben feels.

[jncar]

Thanks!

[neeems]

This was so amazing. I am now trying my hardest not to google "claymation porn" (though a part of me kind of wants to).

[jncar]

Thanks!

[sunnyday678]

Little Ben!!!!! This was unbelievable. Every scene was so realistic; these are absolutely what the deleted scenes would have been. And your Ben voice is spot-on. You pace his speaking voice just right, and you use transition words like "so" and "well" in ways that he absolutely would. This was a fic I really lost myself in... so good!

[jncar]

Thanks so much! I love getting comments about getting voice and character right, because that's what matters most to me.

[princess_george]

Wow, there were so many moments, and we have very compatible head-canon at a really detailed level, and then you added a bunch of stuff I'd never have thought of in a million years, but which is perfect. The Li'l Sebastian origin story (and then WTF to do with it after the breakup?), him tossing her hat on the sofa, the scene against the door which was anti-porn in the best possible sense of the term... really all of it was very very satisfying, which was right on-target for this section!

Wait, maybe that is weird. Anyhow, this is great, and every single word was worth it.

Also, CLAYMATION PORN. Now I can't unread that.

[jncar]

Thanks so much! I had to put in some anti-porn, because that's how real life couples work, and these two are so much like a real life couple. I'm glad you liked it.

[lizinstereo]

I'm now curious about what clamation porn would entail.

And I love how Ben gets over his belief that he's a liability to Leslie's campaign. This was fantastic.

[jncar]

Thanks!