Fic: Witness Protection, part 14/??

Oct 02, 2012 23:10

Title: Witness Protection, part 14/?
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 5,000
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness ( Read more... )

witness protection, parks and rec, fic

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saucydiva October 3 2012, 09:16:54 UTC
PIKITIS!

That is all.

Well, no, that's not all. You've got me excited for the future chapters, but this one was heartbreaking too. Ben's clearly going to do something stupid when he returns to Pawnee, and I'm excited/dreading whatever that is.

And I was glad Leslie and Chris got to have a moment, because Leslie is totally the type to put up walls with her friend's exes. And that Chris apologized to Ann. Good for him.

Oh, and I love how Paul was saved by Leslie, but not her breasts. Excellent.

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jncar October 7 2012, 18:22:47 UTC
Thanks! I never thought I'd have so much fun writing Chris. But I am. I really am.

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sunnyday678 October 3 2012, 10:11:13 UTC
This chapter was excellent just like those before it and the juicy ones that are coming I'm sure! You have woven together such an awesome and epic story, and the characters are so fleshed out and believable. I get so excited when you post an update because I find myself really caring about them and what's going to happen next. Thank you, thank you for keeping this going, I can't wait for more!

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jncar October 7 2012, 18:23:31 UTC
Thanks so much! I care about them, too, and I'm glad that some of my readers feel the same way. It warms my heart. <3

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jncar October 7 2012, 18:24:16 UTC
Thanks! It hasn't been easy keeping this thing going, but I'm way too invested in this version of the characters to give up now.

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stillscape October 3 2012, 17:06:11 UTC
I'm so excited to see Downward Spiral Chris--that just fits in so well to this plot. And poor Ben. And poor Leslie and Ann, really. This is so delightfully complicated, but organically so.

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jncar October 7 2012, 18:25:26 UTC
Thanks! When depressed-Chris first appeared in Canon I was so delighted, in part because it finally made Chris interesting, and in part because it finally made clear to me the path to take the character on in this fic. Lovely when new canon can do that. :-)

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jncar October 7 2012, 18:25:46 UTC
thanks!

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