Comments | jncar: Fic: Witness Protection, part 15/??

jncar

Fic: Witness Protection, part 15/??

Oct 20, 2012 11:01

Title: Witness Protection, part 15/?
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 10,000
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness ( Read more... )

witness protection, parks and rec, fic

Comments 14

kyrieanne October 20 2012, 17:32:22 UTC

"He looked back down at his hands. "Thank you. I appreciate that.""

This moment gave me flashbacks to "Smallest Park." I don't know if that was the intent, but I could see it perfectly.

I love how you've slowly built tension with this premise and when Ben drunk kissed her I was both so mad at him and so happy at the same time. I am happy she finally knows the secret. I liked it that Ben told her to go do the research rather than telling her everything himself. It just felt more realistic, more Leslie, if that makes sense.

Anywho, yay! for all of this.

sullen_aquarian October 20 2012, 17:48:14 UTC

Oh my gosh, I have been waiting for this. At last Leslie knows! I can't wait to see what she does once she learns more about the trial.

I also can't decide which is a better failed-breakup baked good: L-shaped eclairs or Batman brownies.

americnxidiot October 20 2012, 17:51:20 UTC

Oh my gosh, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. I think I actually made an irl "ahh" sound by the end of the chapter. This unfolded so well, with so many aborted break up attempts and then Ben finally being backed into a corner he couldn't get out of. This was so great, and I'm so excited for the next chapter.

craponaspatula October 20 2012, 17:52:03 UTC

HE TOLD HER HER TOLD HER HE TOLD HER!!!!! It's what I've been wanting the whole time but now I am afraid.

I also have to admit that I nearly googled Everson Pharmaceuticals as Ben instructed before I remembered it is not actually real.

sashanaa October 20 2012, 19:15:34 UTC

I almost screamed as soon as he told her omg! I was waiting for this chapter. Now I'm super anxious to see how she reacts.

Also, there were so many moments with the Batman brownies that reminded me of past episodes. I love that a lot.