Fic: "What is Right" Chapter 3, Lizzie Bennet Diaries

[jncar]

Title: What is Right, Chapter 3
Fandom: The Lizzie Bennet Diaries
Characters: Lizzie Bennet/William Darcy, Lydia, Jane, Gigi, George, Mr. Bennet
Rating: R/M
Word Count: ~5,700
Summary: William Darcy has a plan to stop George Wickham. He needs Lydia and a car. What he doesn't plan for is Lizzie inviting herself along for the ride. A road trip AU.

Comments

[anmasp]

Okay so I'm finally caught up now and I'M DYING. You have killed me with this! GAH I can't wait for the next part! I loved their conversation in his hotel room and of course all the making out and other things! EEEEEEE!

[courtknees1]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH this made me feel a lot of things. Most of them very good. Some anguish at the end there. I'm sorry I'm feeling rather too much to write you a coherent review right now. So I will just say that I really admire the way you write their conversations, as it shows great understanding/insight into their characters. And also, Darcy's one use of "fuck", and Lizzie's reaction, and also that whole scene in general, was pretty damn sexy.

[saucydiva]

So, I'm spending today catching up on fic, and this is just glorious. I love their bedroom scene; the use of Darcy swearing, and Lizzie's sexual history- which feels so entirely correct and matches my headcanon almost exactly- is just perfect. And I like the money issue as you present it; how awkward for Lizzie to have to deal with, but (Darcy's right) class issues are a thing.

[craponaspatula]

Road trip AUs FOR THE WIN.

[missnumbat]

I enjoy your writing so much.