Fic: "What is Right" Chapter 4, Lizzie Bennet Diaries

[jncar]

Title: What is Right, Chapter 4
Fandom: The Lizzie Bennet Diaries
Characters: Lizzie Bennet/William Darcy, Lydia, Jane, Gigi, George, Mr. Bennet
Rating: R/M
Word Count: ~ 10,200
Summary: William Darcy has a plan to stop George Wickham. He needs Lydia and a car. What he doesn't plan for is Lizzie inviting herself along for the ride. A road trip AU

Comments

[saucydiva]

What a fabulous ending! I love the confrontation, and how George twists in the wind, trying to use his charm on two people that are entirely unlikely to buy it.

And the Lizzie/Darcy sex was amazing, of course. I love her hiding in the bed while he's gone to the corner drugstore, which is just perfect.

Lovely fic!

[levondrious]

I'm so glad you posted this today! It definitely lifted my spirits. So glad to see these two happy and on the same page after the misunderstandings. I really enjoyed the moment where they clarified their relationship. The entire beach scene was particularly lovely. Your fics just always leave me with such a warm, wonderful feeling.

[courtknees1]

This was such a lovely ending! I feel like you have such a great grasp of all the characters, including George - you did a really good job of showing how his manipulative mind works, and the loan sharks thing was smart. I loved that you had them pause for the condom run so they could each contemplate what was about to happen (and naked Lizzie breaking Darcy's brain - get it girl!). Now, I have only one question - what's Darcy's Lizzie ringtone? Thanks for the great story :)

[craponaspatula]

WHAT IS THE RINGTONE!??!?

[craponaspatula]

Also, this is all great! Loved what you did with the confrontation, though I wouldn't have minded Wickham getting punched, too. And the romance. Swoooon.