It's Back! - Witness Protection chapter 21

[jncar]

Title: Witness Protection, part 21/??
Fandom: Parks and Recreation
Characters/Ships: Ben/Leslie, Chris/Ann, Andy/April, Ben/Pawnee, ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~ 10,000
Summary: When corporate whistleblowers Ben Adams and Chris Robinson barely escape an attempt on their lives, they gladly accept the protection of the Federal Witness

Comments

[angelica_rules]

DAMMIT JERRY!!!!!!!
she got shot and hospitalized and he can't see her??? all my cries! such a great chapter, cannot wait to read more!

[shornt]

I IMMEDIATELY TOOK MY 15 MINUTE BREAK WHEN RACHEL TEXTED ME THAT YOU UPDATED THIS, and holy shit you did not hold back.

This has been an incredibly heartbreaking fic to follow and this chapter was really hard to read. You've really built up the tension - both their relationship and the chase of Ben and Chris - so supremely well. I've felt a sense of dread for a few chapters now and just, wow, you really brought that to a crazy head. Amazing, so hard to read, but I mean that in the best way. This shit is good.

[tbhf]

I love this fic so much, and I was so happy to see it updated!! You write just amazingly well...I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, and I was even tearing up by the end. My heart hurts for these versions of the characters I love so much! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

[stillscape]

Hey, you weren't kidding about the bangs!

I think what I like most about this chapter is that even with the violence and the angst, it still somehow feels like the show, especially the April/Andy and Jerry parts (damn it, Jerry). But, god. Ben shot someone! Leslie got shot! All the tension!

[beanyb]

I'm so happy to see this update. Your little hints about what was coming up on tumblr had me so antsy about it! And boy, was I right to be!

Of course April knew all along, and of course Jerry would tell the guys where they were. The action was so well paced. I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next!