Promises made, promises broken - Part 4

[jo19844_twfic]

Promises Made, Promises Broken
Part 4
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG - NC17 
Spoilers: end of days. 
Warning: some icky descriptions of decay
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood... believe me... if I did Jack and Ianto would walk around in nothing but tight pants (and a tie for Ianto.) The BBC own it, so as much as I love it I don't own it :( 
Summary: Jack

Comments

[itoshii_chan]

I always get excited whenever you update!

I'm just so happy that things are starting to come together for Janto, but the Doctor saying that Jack will not be staying even for Ianto sounds just so ominous...

I DON'T LIKE IT! A.T. A.L.L.!!

I LIKE 10, but he better not do something to break them-up and and thus piss me off! *glares at 10* And Jack better not do something stupid again, either!

The mystery's been introduced and I'm even more eager to read the next chappie now!

[jo19844_twfic]

its funny cos this is a rewrite but theres been so much extra put in and so much taken out that it's a whole new story lol The concept is the same but everything else has changed

chapter 3,4 and 5 were the original chapter 3 lol its all been changed and built on.

Thanks for all the nice words. jojo lubadub youuuu

[itoshii_chan]

AAAAH? I see. *nods* It might be all new and interesting for me since I never read the original to begin with, so... ^^;;

[thrace_adams]

Another great chapter, just sorry Weevils got in the way of all the fun, and I'm NOT going to worry about what the Doctor said, I'm happily going to reside in the Land of Denial where Jack and Ianto frolic and get naked all day long :)

[mrs_cj_harkness]

I love the banter between Jack/Doc/Martha in the car. I can *so* imagine that and like itoshii_chan said, when the Doc said that Jack wouldn't even stay for Ianto ... can't be good :)

Cannot wait for the next update!

[missthingsplace]

Great story, can't wait for the next bit.

[samantharichter]

Either my memory is really bad, or you changed a lot. I only get the "read this before" feeling very seldomly. I'm loving it though. Especially the dialogue!!! <3

[jo19844_twfic]

No it is VERY different... more like a different story completely. The part with his brother is very different too.. and i see it being alot longer by the end lol...

Glad you loe the dialogue! thats a huge compliment!