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Just Like A Jones 34/37

Dec 15, 2009 04:55

Just Like A Jones
Chapter: 34
Rating: NC-17 for series
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Ianto. Mica. David. Martha. Gwen/Rhys. Lois. Johnny/Rhiannon.
Synopsis: Mica may be a Davies, but sometimes she acts like a Jones. Set 13 years in the future. The world is a very different place, and Torchwood is a world that Jack doesn't want to know, but a promise made ( Read more... )

just like a jones

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jo19844_twfic December 15 2009, 23:00:08 UTC

If you're good i may!

spagtscully December 17 2009, 21:54:58 UTC

Very lovely! Again, such a unique storyline and fab writing style!

Also, thought I would mention, great job with the spelling. Didn't get pulled out once! Keep up the writing! :D

jo19844_twfic December 17 2009, 23:01:44 UTC

I dunno if maybe i was a little more pressures for the other parts and didnt take enough care. thanks for the concrit. it always pulls me down a little but its important that i improve.

mellten December 20 2009, 05:48:41 UTC

I really, really like this fic so far!

Great storyline, and I adore Mica. I wish you'd make Gwen less...whiny, maybe? You write her as if she's an insensitive nosy bitch, kind of, no offense, that just how I saw your Gwen :)

Love the fic though, please update soon! :D

Just Like A Jones 34/37 jo19844_twfic December 20 2009, 10:53:00 UTC

i kinda feel like i failed gwen in this fic. i usually manage to make her non hatey cos i do like her. Ill try to fix it.

I always fail at something :(