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jo19844_twfic

Just Like A Jones 35/40

Dec 23, 2009 21:27

Just Like A Jones
Chapter: 35
Rating: NC-17 for series
Pairing/Characters: Jack/Ianto. Mica. David. Martha. Gwen/Rhys. Lois. Johnny/Rhiannon.
Synopsis: Mica may be a Davies, but sometimes she acts like a Jones. Set 13 years in the future. The world is a very different place, and Torchwood is a world that Jack doesn't want to know, but a promise made ( Read more... )

Comments 17

yantoharkness December 23 2009, 21:47:14 UTC

this is great lol when mica walked in on them hehehe ohhhh whats rhi gonna tell andy? great job

jo19844_twfic December 23 2009, 23:19:55 UTC

thankyah!

love youuuu

merry christmas

laeliacatt December 23 2009, 23:14:39 UTC

The kitchen scene was fun. Well, it ain't just the eggs that are in the process of being tossed. Heee! Poor Mica seeing them and being scarred for life. :D

Rhi is slipping back into her old ways, it seems. Temporarily, I hope. I was worried about her going out alone but at least she went to the police station. I wonder how Andy is going to deal with her? And will Mica get back in time to avoid a disaster? I guess we'll see in the next chapter! :)

An intriguing chapter, as always. I'm glad you finally found the problem with the formatting weirdness. What did it turn out to be? The Richtext bug?

Happy Holidays, hon!

jo19844_twfic December 23 2009, 23:18:56 UTC

im not sure. I was using HTML and not richtext so no idea!

btw your 2nd para made me tghink of the old batman cartoon lol just before the "find out next week" bit lol

thanks for replying :D

ETA: Merry Christmas XD

firefly124 December 24 2009, 00:56:54 UTC

Ah, poor Mica, walking in on the grownups. *g* I'm glad it looks like they'll have their one carefree day, but I do worry what's going to happen when Rhiannon gets Andy. *bites fingernails* Lovely chapter!

jo19844_twfic December 24 2009, 01:00:55 UTC

thanks :D

merry christmas

spagtscully December 24 2009, 06:23:42 UTC

This chapter was a great addition to the story! I loved Mica's reaction, definitely classic! :D

jo19844_twfic December 28 2009, 23:52:00 UTC

thanks :D

hope you had a merry Christmas.

wanda1969 December 24 2009, 07:03:49 UTC

I'm so pleased that it looks like this will reach 40 chapters- I don't want it to end!
As usual, a fabulous installment with Mica 'scarred for life'! But what's Rhiannon up to??

jo19844_twfic December 28 2009, 23:52:59 UTC

thanks very much,. i think it needed some non-serious softness at this point.

as for Rhiannon... wait and see... tomorrow or the day after should be as long as you need wait i thnk.