Beautiful Iris 1/20

[jo19844_twfic]

Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Tosh/Owen, Ianto/Gwen (sort of

Comments

[excentric397]

I cannot begin to express how much I hate self-righteous, judgemental, hypocritical, shrewish bitch Gwen. I hope you kill her off next chapter. Or send her to Raxacoricofallapatorius so she can spend her life arguing with the Slitheen. Rhys will be so much better off without her anyway, even if he is too blind to see it as written. Every time she gets away with her shit, it just makes Jack look more and more like a moron and a really bad leader. Great writing, Torchwood. (I wonder if they understand sarcasm.) Thank goodness for fan fiction that actually gives her consequences. Which I'm really hoping this one does. Well, you did say please.

[jo19844_twfic]

I think tw writers created ine hellof a MarySue in Gwen - she has some great qualities, but they really fucked it up. I'm sorry to say I dont kill her off (unlike RTD, I dont like to kill characters off for no reason) but I hope you find it enjoyable :)

[excentric397]

It started out good, so I am eagerly anticipating it all being posted so I can read it. A new story is always welcome.

[ally_p_x]

It's so nice to see someone returning to the fandom!

I remember reading this when you originally posted it and look forward to re-reading it and finding out how it ends.

Welcome back.

[jo19844_twfic]

It's far different now. Quite a bit has been redone, and a good 8 chapters added on, too. Hope you're going to enjoy it. I missed fandom.

[jo02]

Seeing you back in the fandom and working on this makes me really happy.

I will probably wait until it is all done before I start reading, which I normally do with WiPs but I just wanted to let you know I'm cheering in the background :)

[jo19844_twfic]

Well parts 1-20 are all done :) I'm considering an epilogue though, so hopefully it won't be long begore you read it ;)

I hope I do get some readers though, it's a scary thought that I would put so much thought into plot and have nobody read it lol.