robotech fic - maelström

[jo_anderson_rt]

Disclaimer: I don’t own Robotech or any of it’s characters. This fic was written for entertainment purposes only. No infringement is intended.
Author’s note: This is a Roy and Lisa fanfic, you are warned. If you don’t want to read this please don’t. I wrote this because I have always think that Roy is an awesome character and that he and Lisa will

Comments

[gppr]

Ohhh, very cool addition. Lisa's emotions go from extreme sadness to extreme anger! Thay girl doesn't get a break, does she? And Rick is a chicken... ARGH! A good intentioned one, but a chicken nonetheless. Oh Roy, Roy... getting the short end of the stick.

[jo_anderson_rt]

you know I haven't notice how evil I have been with Lisa until you said that I have her at the edge of nervous break down. So now I think I need to write a more "happy" chapter for her. Try to make her have a good day where she doesn't need to ride a roller-coaster of emotions.
Maybe I'll torture Roy a bit more, he has had nice days lately.. why do I have to be so evil? *insert evil smile*
But that will be for chap 11, chap 10 is already done and I don't want to change it :P

[agent_cavendish]

Brilliant chapter my dear, had me squering from beginning to end.

I loved how Lisa and Roy have this BFF relationship and are comfortable with each other making jokes and everything, and Roy is turning into this teddy bear we all know he is (when he gave Lisa the chocolate bar).

And Rick... he's a douchebag! Hiding in his car while Lisa is waiting for him to all and everything? He's so in my black list ¬¬... hopefully, Lisa'll get over him faster than the speed of sound and he'll be left all alone. THAT'd make my day.

What else... Lt. Thompson, IMHO, is quite the slapper, throwing herself at Roy and Rick. I really want her out of the picture, but knowing you, maybe she'll be around to cause drama.

I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next with the Lisa/Roy drama and bunnies' the shopping spree.

See you on the next review... xoxo, -

[jo_anderson_rt]

I'm so glad I got you squeeing! yay!
Roy is really a teddy bear and Rick is just a coward.
About Thompson, well we will keep seeing her around *evil grin* but for very different reasons than the ones I think you are thinking :P

[kkm7806]

Fabulous chapter! I can't believe Roy is going back to his old ways. I hope he changes his ways soon and him and Lisa reconcile. I love how at ease those two are with each other. They seem happy when they are hanging out together. I think those are the best parts of the story. When they just hang out and talk. Their friendship is great, but I can't wait to see them be more than friends. Looking forward to see what happens next. :)

[jo_anderson_rt]

I'm really glad that you enjoy reading them at ease, those scene are so easy to write and they are truly happy together, and that friendship that they are developing will the base for them to be together.
Roy might surprise you on the next chapter ;)