Robotech fic - maelström

[jo_anderson_rt]

Maelström chapter 12

“You stupid idiot! How could you?” Roy said as he pushed Rick against a nearby VT.

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[agent_cavendish]

Everytime you give us a new chapter, I almost never review without 'cause I prefer commenting my opinions directly with you, but this time, I'll make an exception.

I really should be studying for my final test, but here I am, squeeing like a squirell on caffeine ^^. This chapter is absolutely perfect in so many ways I can't explaing without bouncing in my bedroom or grinning like a madwoman.

You should have seen my face when Roy took Lisa to the balcony... I was like that girl from the New Moon reaction video I made you watch (the hardcore Twilight fan); instead of "THE BEACH!" I said "THE VENT DUCT!!!!!!!!" =P.

And “I would have chosen you. Over Minmei, I would have chosen you,” he stated. had me close to tears and a HUGE squee attack. Can't they be any cuter?? I'm so shipping Roy/Lisa from now on. Let's forget about the whiny, confused, and a-**le (among other adjectives) Hunter... Roy Fokker is in da haus!!! *add rapper accent* Roy/Lisa ftfw

[jo_anderson_rt]

yay I'm glad you liked the chapter and I knew you will recognize immediately the vent duct thingy *grins*
Roy is absolutely lovely here, I want one for myself lol! and Rick .. Rick who?? there's someone named rick on this fic?

[gppr]

You keep delivering very nice chpaters, Jo. I loved Roy here. And finally Lisa starts to recognize her reactions to him for what they are.

[jo_anderson_rt]

I'm very happy that you liked this chapter :) :)
I bet you already know this but I love my Roy and how he is so protective of Lisa.
And yes Lisa is slowly starting to recognize that she felt some butterflies in her stomach when she is with Roy :)
Thanks a lot for the review :)

[gaelushawk]

Hola, Jo.

EEEEhmmmm ... me encanta que Roy haga cosas romanticas por ella.
El hombre está enamorado!!!
=)

[jo_anderson_rt]

Ehhh!!! que bueno que te gustara el capitulo :)
Roy esta enamoradisimo pero aun no se da cuenta y Lisa no se queda atras :)
muchas gracias por el review y creeme roy seguira haciendo cosas romanticas por ella ;)

[kkm7806]

This is such a lovely story. I really enjoy reading each new chapter, especially this chapter. I love seeing Roy so protective of Lisa and being by her side. She needs to move on from what's his name. I like how you ended the chapter with Lisa beginning to realize what Roy is becoming to mean to her. Those two are meant for each other.

By the way, I had a couple of questions. In a previous chapter there was a mention of a dance or ball. Is that going to happen in a later chapter? And do you know how many more chapters you will be writing? Great chapter. Look forward to more.

[jo_anderson_rt]

It's so great to read that you are enjoying this story :)
Roy is for sure winning Lisa's heart little by little and sooner than you expected Lisa will forget what's his name lol!
About your questions
In a previous chapter there was a mention of a dance or ball. Is that going to happen in a later chapter?
the New Year's Eve Ball will take place in 3 or 4 chapters ahead and I think it will be a very interesting chapter ;)
And do you know how many more chapters you will be writing?
I honestly don't know but I think at least 10 more chapters.
thank you so much for the review and like I said before I'm very happy that you are enjoying this fic :)

*new reader...*

[endlessxxbliss]

OH-MY-GOODNESS! This is wonderful!
Finally! They're now realizing that there's actually a little somethin'-somethin' goin' on.
Part of me was hoping that this would be story where someone falls for Lisa first. But does it really matter? you've created a masterpiece filled with irresistible whirlwinds of deep, intruiging emotions. Nothing beats that.
And ooohhh... that line... that simple yet captivating line (“I would have chosen you”) still rings in my head. [A VERY GOOD THING!]
Please, for the love of all that's holy, update SOON.