On The Outs With Everyone (the beginning)

[joelybean]

Title: On The Outs With Everyone

Comments

[butter_brickle]

Oh, yes, I'm definitely grooving on this. <---gah, what the hell did I just say?

Ok, I'm liking it. *lol* It feels much fuller than the last one and seems like there's a million different things you can do with it, which I'm anxious to see. :)

[inpurity]

I totally agree with butter_brickle, it's just the beginning and there are a million different ways this one can go and I am looking forward each and every one of them! I love the dialogue very very effective! keep it up!
xxx

[emapril_showers]

I hope you continue this soon, & that you don't mind me adding you :)

I got stuck right into that Jere fic you wrote... It should've been LONGER is all!

Hehe...