Comments | john_teyla_fic: Fic - A Child's Insight PG John and T.J. JohnTeyla Thing-a-thon 2008

ltcoljsheppard in john_teyla_fic

Fic - A Child's Insight PG John and T.J. JohnTeyla Thing-a-thon 2008

Jul 04, 2008 13:23

Recipient: liviapenn

Title: A Child's Insight
Author/Artist: ltcoljsheppard
Summary/Description: John spends time with Teyla's son, now five years old
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: John, T.J. and Teyla
Word count: 2352
Spoilers: Teyla's son's canon name is mentioned, referred to as T.J.
Warnings: Season 5 spoiler, baby's name
Recipient: this was written ( Read more... )

thingathon2008, fic

Comments 23

2bluaeryn July 3 2008, 23:35:57 UTC

I'm going to cry. Beautiful!

ltcoljsheppard July 4 2008, 13:04:08 UTC

Aww dont cry. I'm glad you liked my little story. It's only the second time I've written a scene with a small child in it; both boys too. :) Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate your wonderful comment. - JS

liviapenn July 4 2008, 11:08:31 UTC

This was just absolutely darling. *sighs happily* Thank you for writing it for me! I'm glad my prompt could inspire you.

ltcoljsheppard July 4 2008, 13:02:39 UTC

You don't know how happy it makes me to know that you like the story. It was a very challenging prompt and I don't think I've ever been that nervous - praying it would be acceptable. :D *cheers inside* Thanks for the prompt and thanks so much for liking it. lolol - JS

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ltcoljsheppard July 4 2008, 19:36:39 UTC

Thanks Wedjatqi! I'm so glad you enjoyed my little story. Gotta admit I think I fell in love with little T.J. too. *grin* Thanks for commenting I appreciate it! - JS

anonymous July 4 2008, 20:32:44 UTC

WOW!! This is so beautiful. I just wish they would get together. John and Teyla are just so suited to one another. Its such a shame that neither will admit how they feel.

ltcoljsheppard July 5 2008, 18:14:57 UTC

Yeah well..... here's hoping for Season 5 right? I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for leaving feedback, I appreciate it. - JS

renisanz July 5 2008, 04:24:36 UTC

Uhm. . . wow. I love how you had Torren desribe "love" to John. The way he explained how his mother's voice changed whenever she said his or John's name. . . and John's reaction was spot on. Beautiful. :)

ltcoljsheppard July 5 2008, 15:13:45 UTC

Thank you very much, Renisanz. I really appreciate that. That little boy was a great experience to write. I'm glad he came across the way I'd hoped. -- JS