Comments | johnnyruin: we'll all forget to exhale

johnnyruin

we'll all forget to exhale

Apr 06, 2006 06:21

what happened to all of those things we used to keep inside ( Read more... )

Comments 5

nyx_47 April 6 2006, 08:29:58 UTC

I doesn't seem like you are ever looking for comments on your work...but just the same I would like to say I really enjoyed this one. The imagery created by the last five lines hit home, seeing as I work in a little cubicle everyday. *shrug*

johnnyruin April 6 2006, 20:22:51 UTC

I wouldn't say that I'm not looking for comments. It's true that it's definitely not ever why I write things. But I appreciate them all the same. Thank you for yours.

nyx_47 April 6 2006, 20:30:30 UTC

I guess that sort of came out wrong. I always read your posts, but it seems like it is written for yourself more than other peoples reactions to it. Does that make sense? Sometimes I talk nonsense, pay me no attention :-)

I really do enjoy your writing. I have a terrible time getting myself not to rhyme everything and admire those who can write with a contemporary edge.

cinnamon876 April 6 2006, 21:16:23 UTC

i hope you know how i feel about what and how you write.

johnnyruin April 7 2006, 01:45:23 UTC

That's a big 10-4, Red good buddy.