Something Else; cont.

[johnpfannkuchen]

Mexico, of course, where else? He rubbed his knuckles over and over with each hand, alternating as his various executions were imagined in the death pit of his mind. John wasn’t too clear on the various ways people were put to death in the United States. The electric chair is a classic, and then there’s lethal injection. Maybe he’d just get life

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Re: There will be ball meat in his mother’s hair as she cries for the loss of her only son.

[johnpfannkuchen]

Ha!

Re: There will be ball meat in his mother’s hair as she cries for the loss of her only son.

[johnpfannkuchen]

I realized that I wrote that extension in 3rd person omniscent! It's supposed to be first person! Haahhahaha! I knew I was forgetting something. Anyway, here's the quick rewrite plus a correction or two