dude, so. the only thing i like better than jealous Himchan is jealous Jongup. This whole thing pretty much hit all my buttons, really, from Jongup standing up for himself to Himchan dealing with his feelings INCREDIBLY MATURELY by trying to avoid them to himup making out angrily to Yongguk being long-suffering xD
I love Himchan being so confused at first about Jongup's jealousy, and then both of them using Bangup against each other. They're such assholes and it's pretty much the best. and then and then and thennnn things actually get really sweet, "i love you the most" ajwoijfioajwifajwifjaw THERE, YOU DID IT, YOU MADE ME KEYBOARD SMASH.
Basically YAY, thank you, this was all-around delightful :)
Thank you! I absolutely LOVE writing jealous Jongup omg. Could there be anything better than a dominant angry possessive Jongup??! I THINK NOT.
And LOL you know BangHim have done stuff on the sly. They just seem like the type of people who would have zero reservations about messing around together and it mean nothing. Yongguk is just an easy going, free spirit who doesn't think about his sexuality and Himchan will play around with anyone as long as he can close his eyes and pretend it's Jongup ;)
Oh my, jealous Jongup is hot as F. Jealous Jongup toying with a flustered Himchan is even hotter. And jealous Jongup making threats at Yongguk... damn, that's super hot. :D
The mature scene definitely gets two thumbs and even two big toes up from me! :) It's really refreshing and really, really great to read a more realistic scene like that instead of the heteronormative sex scenes that sadly are too common in m/m fics these days.
Big thanks for sharing this, reading it was a real treat and I truly needed one after an insane few days at work. <3 And props to the person who sent in the prompt, too - this was definitely a great subject for a fic!
Thank you for reading and commenting! I was really hesitant about that rated M scene. I rarely ever write smutty stuff anymore because it just makes me feel uncomfortable and I'm so worried that comes off in my stories >.< so I'm happy it made sense and didn't seem like too much. By heteronormative are you meaning like one has to be the girl and one has to be the boy? Yeah I hate that in fics, too. I like the thought of them switching things up depending on who is feeling friskier that day. And I love, love, LOVE making everyone think that one person would be the "topper" and it actually turn out to be the opposite one :D Like here I tried to write Himchan as being more sexually mature and confident but BAM Jongup comes in and FUCKS UP ALL OF HIS WELL LAID PLANS.
Yeah, the whole "one has to be the masculine top and the other must be the feminine bottom" thing is something that really bothers me, and another one is how that's often combined with altogether unrealistic sex. Like there needs to be penetration, all the time, even if the characters are completely unexperienced with having sex, with little to no prep and absolutely no mention of necessary prep steps like enemas (although I do recognize that they're not very sexy :D). So it's basically just m/f sex with male characters playing both parts, which makes the stories feel more like wish fulfillment in which the reader can imagine themselves in the place of the bottom without feeling in any way threatened by a (mary sue style) female protagonist. My recent pet peeve is how hetero sex slang terminology is for some reason spreading into m/m fics and the authors using the terms either have zero idea of what they really mean or they have no idea of how the human body works. :D It's the kind of stuff that makes me drop a fic immediately
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I love Himchan being so confused at first about Jongup's jealousy, and then both of them using Bangup against each other. They're such assholes and it's pretty much the best. and then and then and thennnn things actually get really sweet, "i love you the most" ajwoijfioajwifajwifjaw THERE, YOU DID IT, YOU MADE ME KEYBOARD SMASH.
Basically YAY, thank you, this was all-around delightful :)
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and omg banghim handjob! bwahaha
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I absolutely LOVE writing jealous Jongup omg. Could there be anything better than a dominant angry possessive Jongup??! I THINK NOT.
And LOL you know BangHim have done stuff on the sly. They just seem like the type of people who would have zero reservations about messing around together and it mean nothing. Yongguk is just an easy going, free spirit who doesn't think about his sexuality and Himchan will play around with anyone as long as he can close his eyes and pretend it's Jongup ;)
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The mature scene definitely gets two thumbs and even two big toes up from me! :) It's really refreshing and really, really great to read a more realistic scene like that instead of the heteronormative sex scenes that sadly are too common in m/m fics these days.
Big thanks for sharing this, reading it was a real treat and I truly needed one after an insane few days at work. <3 And props to the person who sent in the prompt, too - this was definitely a great subject for a fic!
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I was really hesitant about that rated M scene. I rarely ever write smutty stuff anymore because it just makes me feel uncomfortable and I'm so worried that comes off in my stories >.< so I'm happy it made sense and didn't seem like too much.
By heteronormative are you meaning like one has to be the girl and one has to be the boy? Yeah I hate that in fics, too. I like the thought of them switching things up depending on who is feeling friskier that day. And I love, love, LOVE making everyone think that one person would be the "topper" and it actually turn out to be the opposite one :D Like here I tried to write Himchan as being more sexually mature and confident but BAM Jongup comes in and FUCKS UP ALL OF HIS WELL LAID PLANS.
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