Happy Birthday Kakashi

[jokerlove]

Title: Happy Birthday Kakashi
Characters: kakairu Asuma and Kureni as accessories
Warnings: rated M for sex, yaoi, kakaXiru, one shot, and horrible spelling!!!
Summary: Its Kakashi's birthday! And Kureni and Asuma are getting him a cute dophin for a present, even if they have to kidnap said dolphin.XD Kakashi really likes what he gets!
A/N: This is the

Comments

[roninlvr]

I liked this! Poor Iruka, getting kidnapped by Kuremai and Asuma was not fun. However, I do have to compliment the two for doing it!! Oh my, I had lots of fun picturing Iruka in his kitten costume. *evil grin* Congrats on posting you did great.
BTW, I hope you don't mind, but I noticed that in the very beginning of your story you started sentences without capital letters. You did correct this very quickly, but I did notice some sentences that did not. It didn't detract from the story at all, but I just thought you might want to know. You did a great job! I look forward to reading more!

[oni_link001]

NEh! *squeee* This story was good. Yes there were quiet a bit of spelling errors but the plot made up for it! I hope to see more of your stories! \(^o^)/

[normanee]

Very nice, please write more and post!

thankie

[jokerlove]

Thanks and no! i love getting constructive critisisum or how ever you spell that! lol acctually i read back though it and decided that it was done rather badly and the grammar was horrible and it could had stood another goingover but i'm really too lazy to change it! lol! but thanks yall are great!

[new_moongirl]

HOT! thats all i gotta say. XD

=3 yay kitty iruka!