Read the other one first.

[jonal]

A big sigh and he walks in.  He's nervous and it's obvious, but he doesn't know how to hide it.

The first step into the Red Sea is always the worst.  The bar is set up so that every table is immediately accessible from the door, so you have to choose where you'll sit right away.  Also, (because awkwardness, too, loves company) opening the door

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Hell SIr~

[anonymous]

Jon,
This is really good writing! I am Impressed!
~Tami~

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[anonymous]

Wow, I cant type, sorry about that.