Butterfly

Sep 07, 2013 14:26

Title: Butterfly
Author: Jongbuttbutt
Characters: Yongguk/Himchan
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: character death
Wordcount: 5144
Summary: Himchan wants to die. So Yongguk kept the butterflies safely in his gut and held Himchan's hand a little tighter.Because Himchan was a butterfly. And butterflies flew away.
A/N: [Written for Rasspberrymilk for thebrowniebunch] Big apology to the ( Read more... )

banghim, oneshot

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jongbuttbutt September 8 2013, 17:33:28 UTC
/shriek

omg you're too kind really! And i'm so so so so glad you liked it! I was afraid it might be a little strange/I didn't develop certain parts well. Especially the characterisation but oh no you're too kind! and no your prompts were super awesome and mind blowing I had to read them again a few times! But I settled on the death one because I'm not used to writing plot-driven things and this one felt the most familiar. OH! I might be writing the elections!au one though since I started... if you don't mind!

I was afraid you'd really want himup for this fic because honestly it's a pairing that I'm sure I can't write at all. Awww don't cry, you! It's fine! you can colour with jonguppie!

And I'm super glad I made your day, because you definitely made my day with your lovely comment ;__; I might even be crying. Thanks for receiving this so well oh my this sounds weird but this makes TBB so worthwhile! So thank you<3

/hugs

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jongbuttbutt September 12 2013, 03:32:19 UTC
Oh! Here're your prompts haha! Was pretty much in awe when i saw them ( ... )

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bictory September 6 2013, 15:56:26 UTC
haha I love that the first thing Yongguk notices about Himchan is his philtrum! The imagery/parallel to butterflies was really interesting and it was a beautiful image, but also scary at the same time. I'm a little confused as to what Himchan was suffering exactly, and how he died, but the way you ended it was really moving! How did Yongguk know when the butterfly was going to come? Also baby Jonguppie ;___; Yongguk named him Jongup T___T thanks for writing this!

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jongbuttbutt September 8 2013, 17:41:05 UTC
haha I know omg I was afraid to write that at first because it might come off as a little creepy but that was the first thing i noticed about Himchan and what the heck, Yongguk is kinda creepy here...

Will it be terrible of me to say I'm not exactly sure either? I tried doing some research for the prompt but nothing was good enough so I just left it hanging. Himchan just wants to die because to him death = freedom. He died jumping off a building when he escaped the mental institution. That was the way he's always wanted to die. And Yongguk didn't know the butterfly was coming, the timings are sort of part of the narration.

baby!BAP is my soft spot omg I should probably stop thinking up ways to fit them in all my fics haha!

Thanks for the comment and for reading! /hugs

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crazybananatr3e September 6 2013, 16:44:07 UTC
this was really beautiful!(as always, with your fics) :') <3

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jongbuttbutt September 8 2013, 17:43:58 UTC
UNNIE! omg! Says the person who writes lovely fics ;__;

I'll get down to reading your younglo soon! I can't wait! Clone!au :')

Thanks for commenting you're so lovely /hug

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boo_elf_cass September 8 2013, 14:37:31 UTC
I really really love all of your fanfic and your OTPs is just like mine~

And this fic is the special one that make me feel sad all day long~ That why I wanna translate it into vietnamese~

Can I have your permission to trans it please~!!

Thank you and love you for all that you've writen! ♥

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jongbuttbutt September 8 2013, 17:45:19 UTC
hey!

awwww sure no problem oh my you're making me feel like tearing up! It's my pleasure to have it translated actually :') So thank you!

And thanks for commenting! I love you too<333

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boo_elf_cass September 9 2013, 05:58:53 UTC
Thanksss :*

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boo_elf_cass September 28 2013, 14:27:28 UTC
I've written a comment for you but I don't know why it was marked spam~ Please check it if you have time ♥

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greasytree September 15 2013, 02:17:02 UTC
I was holding off from reading this because I needed to prepare myself and now that I have finally read it OMG WHYYYY CRIES A THOUSAND TEARS ;__; UGH THIS was so beautiful in like everything. I really am having too many emotions right now. I'll have get back to you on this comment /sniffles

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jongbuttbutt September 17 2013, 07:50:21 UTC
omg you're so adorable! no don't cry it's ok it's ok /strokes your hair
thanks so much for reading! and making me laugh with your comment... that's like the opposite of what my fic did to you... oh... :(
/hugs

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greasytree September 18 2013, 08:36:19 UTC
/hugs back
Seriously, though, you're writing is breathtaking and I mean that both figuratively and literally; I was sobbing by the end ;A;

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jongbuttbutt September 18 2013, 13:52:12 UTC
/shrieks
T-thank you... Oh no! /wipes your tears
I'm glad you liked it and took the time to comment HAHA!
WAIT... YOU WROTE THAT FIC FOR LITTLEFUJI RIGHT?

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