gentle bones

Sep 15, 2014 03:37

Title: gentle bones
Author: jongbuttbutt
Characters/Pairings: Daehyun/Youngjae, Daehyun/Himchan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None (really mild swearing and mentions of sex)
Wordcount: 22 997
Summary: Daehyun forgets ever meeting Himchan after the accident and Himchan watches as everything falls apart

[part IV]

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golden_kimono September 17 2014, 08:56:47 UTC
Of course I'm not the person this fic is for, but how could you possibly say you didn't handle this well?? This was beautifully heart-breaking and I felt so sorry for everyone, because oh my god, how horrible to lose your memory and how painful to forget your love, and to think you're not worthy or to feel so alone.

And that last bit, the letter to the past, I don't even have words. I just cried. (And am still doing, but we'll pretend that's not the case.) You are amazing.

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jongbuttbutt September 17 2014, 14:56:19 UTC
Thank you so much oh god! I genuinely thought I wrote a bit off course and it's kinda boring to read coz of the length but I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for picking up on the emotions of the fic I was so scared I didn't manage to portray it.

OMG DON'T CRY!

And thanks again for reading all it! All 4 painful parts of it! you're shooper amazing too<3

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andnowforyaya September 20 2014, 23:37:11 UTC
I am finally sitting down to write you this comment on this fic. First of all, thank you SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT? I absolutely love it and it’s everything I asked for and more ;;;;; so thank you so much <3 ( ... )

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jongbuttbutt September 28 2014, 22:28:29 UTC
omg your comment ;__;
I just wanna say that your comment came when I was feeling homesick and it made me feel so so so so so much better I was smiling to myself like an idiot. You wrote me such a long comment ;__;

and my initial intention was to elaborate on the car accident thing (like maybe Daehyun had been feeling really empty and lost, so much so that he didn't want to care anymore so he stepped onto the streets) but I decided to leave it haha! and I'm so happy you read into the 'boy from the graveyard' thing and the juxtaposition of the present with the past thing coz I was really worried that the flow of the story wouldn't turn out coherent.

And no your comment makes perfect sense omg! I'm the one not making sense anymore!

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THANK YOU READING ALL 4 PARTS ;__; THANKS FOR LEAVING ME WITH THE SWEETEST COMMENT

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