Satisfaction

Feb 04, 2011 03:17

Pairing: Jonghyun/Minho

Rating: NC-17

Genre: Smut

Warning: a little blood.

Summary: Minho bumps into his predator at a fun night out.

A/N: Sequel to Beautiful

I’m back guys~ urgh I’m ashamed to post this fail DX so after I struggled with this for over 5 hours I finally found the will power to write some smut. Behold, le fail!

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minho/jonghyun, !fanfic

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shy_cookie February 3 2011, 19:21:15 UTC
SPOT

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jongkeyfan408 February 3 2011, 19:22:56 UTC
OTL enjoy my fail :)

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shy_cookie February 3 2011, 19:41:25 UTC
fail?
WHAT FAIL?
THIS WAS FREAKING EPIC! I FREAKING LOVED THIS! GOD, IS WAY TOO GOOD!
NOW I WANT MORE!
WHAT TO DO??
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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jongkeyfan408 February 4 2011, 10:37:55 UTC
really? -cries-
god i was worrying so much, you have no idea of how long i've been struggling with the smut omg. i'm so so glad you liked it!!!
ahahaha i don't really know what to do after this...
thanks unnie :)

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jongkeyfan408 February 4 2011, 09:27:41 UTC
all yours :)
yea, you can leave my fail till later unnie, just incase it wrecks your day or something :))

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Re: FAIL?! jongkeyfan408 February 12 2011, 12:06:28 UTC
Ahaha thanks unnie <3
YESYEYSEYS i was thinking of twilight too!!! but it kidna matched so...yea :) LMFAO yes it would be :)
Jjong's a ninja, we all know that!
thank you so much <3

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a_life_defiant February 3 2011, 23:49:52 UTC
HELL YES. reading....

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a_life_defiant February 3 2011, 23:56:44 UTC
O_O

first THIS IS NOT FAIL.

THIS IS WIN. Lots and lots of WIN.

Fuck my life. He thinks as Minho’s blood runs down his hand, separating into different little trails as they wind through the lines of his barren skin, sliding their way along like new born serpents.

you're amazing. end of story.

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jongkeyfan408 February 4 2011, 10:41:12 UTC
ohmygodyouhadnoideahowworriediwas.
okay. now thats out. pheww.
I'm glad you liked the description!! i'm no where as amazing as a lot of writers out there bb :)
thank you so much <3

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jewelry_flower February 4 2011, 01:00:21 UTC
This is the first time I've ever seen a vampire with a puppy eyes and dare to say the name of God, just because he felt sorry for his little prey. Jjong, you precious vampire LOL

Poor Minho, he can't escape from that little shorty devil anymore ;_____;

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jongkeyfan408 February 4 2011, 10:39:48 UTC
HAHA omg i just realised what i did! -smacks self-
yes, minho's forever trapped. :)
thank you so much for reading!

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jewelry_flower February 4 2011, 11:09:56 UTC
I mean, it's really cute LOL

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lynx_dream February 4 2011, 06:53:20 UTC
HOW IS THIS FAIL?!

This is so freaking hot and amazing that my brain has combusted.........

I want a vampire as hot as Jjong drinking my blood. I'd offer myself in a second just like Minho did.

You do know we, your readers, are now going to want more?? Because this is just so damn good it begs for more parts.

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jongkeyfan408 February 4 2011, 10:46:00 UTC
-extinguishes-
nmmmhm yes, i would too :)))
you guys want more of this fail ??
-bangs head against wall- i don't really know what to do next, i might write another though :)

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jewelry_flower February 4 2011, 11:11:06 UTC
You should write more, I motion that!

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