Thank You Chapter 9 (un-beta)

[jongwoonadmirer]

Title: Thank You

Characters:Yesung,Siwon,Kyuhyun, Kyusung, Yewon, YeCHul, 2woon, Super junior

Genre: angst/brotherhood/friendship/family (no lovey dovey pairing)

Rating: PG

Chapter: 9/?

Comments

[nytslyer03]

unnie...
i suggest you make a new paragraph if somebody else is talking so it wouldn't be crammed in a single paragraph and it'll be easier to read.

anyways, kyu changed his treatment towards yesung. omg!
and yesung ah. don't panic! it'll be alright since kyu is there with you.

i'm anticipating what's going to happen next! XD

[jongwoonadmirer]

really? thanks ^^
I didn't double check before posting this...
let's finish this fic quickly!!! ahh how i hate to write this fic!
thans dear for still reading and anticipate this story ^^

[lulufeca]

ooww kyu is treating yesung well, but he is right to ask for his older brothers

siwon and heechul misses them, i bet.

kangin... fighting for him and his transplant history... he should tell kyu

[jongwoonadmirer]

he will but I want to clear Siwon's mess first..I really hate this fic! i have this for almost a month, i should find a new beta-er...i can't reach my beta-er T_T

[lulufeca]

oh, your beta is lost? damn...

the grammar needs more attention, but your fic got me. i can understand even if i need to "fill the blanks"

[jongwoonadmirer]

hahaha...I know..my readers will have difficulties reading this fic and beta-ing really upset me... I wish her to come back and reply my email...she didn't tell me what's her problem...once she give me the beta-ed one, I'll fix this.

[jongwoonadmirer]

Oh dear!! you r here!!! yes both of them wont be mad at him....kyu started to show his true feelings..glad you like it..i will ^^

hwaiting!

[wooncloud]

Ahaha.. i'm back.. :P
I don't know u already update this..:)
its hard to read their conversation dear..If i may give u a little advice, don't made it so tight. make a new paragraph every conversation. I think it would be easier to read. But it's ok, maybe this your writing style..^^
This chap still poor Sichul..bring them to sungiee..
Aww..Kyu started very considerate to sungie..and when sungie said about they fixed the bed so high, oh no sungie.. its not high but u're too short..haha..*thrown by sungie
and its still mysterious story..hehe

Ok.. i'll waiting for next chap..please update soooooooonnnnn...^^

[jongwoonadmirer]

thank you ^^
i should find a beta...

[rayie_159]

finally i found your LJ... i am very like this fict
i always read your fict in AFF before

hope you'll update soon

[jongwoonadmirer]

thank you ^^