Comments | jooles34: My Sun Rises and Sets With You. Chapter one: Take My Breath Away

jooles34

My Sun Rises and Sets With You. Chapter one: Take My Breath Away

Jun 26, 2011 11:46

breathplay, connor temple, primeval, james lester, dom/sub, threesom, my sun rises and sets with you, fanfic, captain becker, lester/becker/connor

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textualdeviance June 26 2011, 11:04:07 UTC

Holy shit.

*dies a little*

*puts reading the rest of this at the top of my to-do list*

jooles34 June 29 2011, 19:35:42 UTC

Thank you so much for such an awesome comment. So glad you like the start and hope you continue to.

lukadreaming June 26 2011, 11:12:28 UTC

Ooh err! Phwoar!

*Iz flushed*

jooles34 June 29 2011, 19:36:11 UTC

Thank you luv.

mermaidstarfish June 26 2011, 12:33:03 UTC

Damn... I can see this one is going to be amazing!

jooles34 June 29 2011, 19:36:40 UTC

Wow, thank you so much. Hope you continue to like.

fredbassett June 26 2011, 12:51:15 UTC

Lester's right, it's definitely got interesting!!!

jooles34 June 29 2011, 19:37:05 UTC

*g* Thank you.

jaynedoll June 26 2011, 14:36:31 UTC

OMG, that was brilliant. I loved the twist of having it turn out Connor was already with Lester - can't wait to read more. I've been dying for a Connor/Becker/Lester threesome with BDSM for ages so this is a bit like Christmas for me - only with added porn obv *g*

jooles34 June 29 2011, 19:37:47 UTC

Porny Christmas! Thank you so much mate; I really hope you continue to like it.