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jooles34

My Sun Rises and Sets With You. Chapter 14/20: Hurt

Jul 27, 2011 08:31

After Connor had left, Lester quietly tidied up the books that had been left out on the shelf, tucking the strip of photographs back where they had been. He took Connor's collar into the bedroom and shut it away inside his bedside drawer.

Becker let him carry on without a word, but as Lester then moved as if to continue with their normal evening ( Read more... )

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fredbassett July 27 2011, 12:46:18 UTC

LJ went down minutes after I saw this had appeared! It's been a long few hours!!!

This was hotter than anything has any right to be!

*flails and melts*

jooles34 July 31 2011, 20:02:21 UTC

Thank you; very big compliment thank you.

tay_21 July 27 2011, 17:18:13 UTC

GUH! I've been trying to get to this all day! :-D

It was totally worth the wait. That was really hot. I love a good flogging. And then the tables turning and Becker topping Dom!Lester! Awesome. But meep meep meep for Connor and his relationship with them. I hope they work things out soon. They all need each other.

Now, hopefully LJ will still let me post the comment...

jooles34 July 31 2011, 20:03:02 UTC

Eeep! Thank you so much; really pleased you liked it.

phoebezu July 28 2011, 08:38:52 UTC

LJ is driving me crazy! Luckily it let me read this chapter yesterday, but I waited until now to be able to comment!

Anyway... How much I waited for this chapter! Well, it was worth! :D
Very good (poor Lester!), but I miss Connor too!!! :(

jooles34 July 31 2011, 20:03:28 UTC

Thank you for a lovely comment!

deinonychus_1 July 28 2011, 18:53:57 UTC

*makes quiet whimpering mewing noises*

How can something be so hot and so heartbreaking at the same time?

Also, I haven't been able to get into lj for the last two days, and having to wait to read the latest chapter of this was *killing* me!

jooles34 July 31 2011, 20:05:32 UTC

Lol, sorry for the killing, but that is a huge compliment, thank you. And thanks for the lovely comment about being hot and heartbreaking, I'm thrilled you think that worked.

lukadreaming July 28 2011, 18:56:44 UTC

I read this almost as soon as you posted it, and I've been trying to comment on it ever since!

Awesomely dark and angsty and just, well, guh!

jooles34 July 31 2011, 20:06:09 UTC

Thank you lovely; glad you liked it as always.