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miss_nicksta July 15 2010, 08:14:50 UTC
Lovely job with the story JA! loveee that it's in Nate's point of view.

Her persona still demanded your attention and respect, but behind her fiery eyes and ruthless vengeance, you could see that she was just tired of it all.

love this line! soooo in character, i really wish they would've played this stuff out better in the show, unfortunately josh doesn't know how to write deep! UNFORTUNATE, lol.

& the ending, he actually tries! in the actual scene, i always felt like they were covering up the ~serena thing, but here, you make it seem like he actually wants to try and fix things, which makes me feel better! haha.

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jordan_alexa July 15 2010, 20:36:16 UTC
thank you darling! lol and yes, Josh obvs has no emotional depth to himself or his own life, so he must write shallow ~drama.

And awhhh, I always thought there was a little bit of wanting to fix things on Nate's part, but your right, it was so close after the Serena thing that we could never really know. I'm glad this ending made you happy though! lol <3

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jordan_alexa July 15 2010, 20:36:54 UTC
thank you bbs!

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ale_la_pazza1 July 15 2010, 16:08:02 UTC
I love it <3

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jordan_alexa July 15 2010, 20:37:06 UTC
:D thanks!

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jordan_alexa July 15 2010, 20:37:29 UTC
thank youuu! Oh I know ♥ I do toooo

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sinfuldream July 16 2010, 00:14:21 UTC
Loved this Jordy!

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jordan_alexa July 16 2010, 02:09:57 UTC
Thanks Dani!

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