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jorgenzen

A (not-so) JETI Children's Story

Dec 02, 2013 00:16

warning: language. have a nanny beside you. or someone three times bigger than you. or a cat. or a dog. they could understand this.
real warning: this is pure crack. not a reflection of my skills. but rather the way i think. maybe.

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jeti, crack

Comments 4

kaorujin December 1 2013, 17:06:30 UTC

OK SO I WAS RUDELY INTERRUPTED BY LIVEJOURNAL FOR ERASING MY COMMENT BEFORE I WAS DONE SO RESTART. omfg I'm just speechless. Just from the title I knew this was going to be a story full of heartache. The intro was so appealing. It just drew me in; the description of the setting was so vivid and the character introduction was so in depth. I like how Jessica (eww I mean maomao) initiated the conversation even though tiff- panypy seems to be more outgoing. I was a little confused and assumed that panypy was indeed a little slow in the head until the POV switched to her and just omfg everything clicked! It was so deep that they couldn't form a relationship because of barriers between species and language. Panypy just goes and drinks her sorrow away because she's 800% done and needs wings to get high and leave this loveless place. Maomao goes and sleeps her sorrows away symbolizing that she's basically dead without panypy. THE MORAL AND THE MEANING HIT HOME SO HARD OMG TEARS FOR DAYS. Best. Angst. Ever. k bye

kaorujin December 1 2013, 17:08:06 UTC

Also the bitch and pussy joke AHAHAHHAHAHAHA

jorgenzen December 1 2013, 17:25:43 UTC

Wow, you is amaz-enghhawh. This is the best intricate comment I've ever gotten. Thank you. Thank you for this. You have summed up all the things I've been trying to convey in this story. Thank you. From the intro description of yours to the morals, you are right. You know me best, karoujin. I shall confess my love for you and this comment. Thank you and I love you. <3 <3 All the hearteuss are for you.

This angst was so hard to do. Me heart was crying. Me eyes bled with redbull tears. Maomao was heartbreaking to write. All she ever did was meow. And all Tiffany did was bark. This was so hard. I shall cry some more. I'm going to hibernate like maomao.

The aftermath from writing this is forever scarred in me heart.

kaorujin December 1 2013, 17:33:08 UTC

Glad I made you laugh :D It's a favor in return for making me laugh u da bestestestestestestestesetsest