Baaaack!! You were first in line for my list of fic catch-up...and then the other fic was gone. >.< ahhh well I made do with this and thoroughly enjoyed. :33
The first was heartbreaking, indeed. Nicely written. Though, the second one REALLY snagged my attention. :000 So many beautiful lines in there. Wonderful imagery...just *siiigh* very gentle and genuine. Was it a snapshot of a real occasion for you?? Quite romantic~~
And you stood there with your bare feet touching the warm rocks, your toes curling in a few times, your skin kissed with light---OMG STOP. That's straight up beautiful. I also loved the part about her skirt riding up her thighs in the wind. Dreamy.
Loved this, gurrrlll. Can't wait to read your newest stuff. ^^
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Baaaack!! You were first in line for my list of fic catch-up...and then the other fic was gone. >.< ahhh well I made do with this and thoroughly enjoyed. :33
The first was heartbreaking, indeed. Nicely written. Though, the second one REALLY snagged my attention. :000 So many beautiful lines in there. Wonderful imagery...just *siiigh* very gentle and genuine. Was it a snapshot of a real occasion for you?? Quite romantic~~
And you stood there with your bare feet touching the warm rocks, your toes curling in a few times, your skin kissed with light---OMG STOP. That's straight up beautiful. I also loved the part about her skirt riding up her thighs in the wind. Dreamy.
Loved this, gurrrlll. Can't wait to read your newest stuff. ^^
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