After The Blues (2/3)

Sep 26, 2014 13:15

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anonymous September 28 2014, 16:02:09 UTC
It just confuses me on how Tiffany was able to get clean that fast. Since drugs is a huge part of the story, I'm hoping the readers would learn more about heroin. Also, are you planning to have another story after this? Because this is the 2nd part and there are other things from the past that needed to be clarified (that is if you don't plan on mentioning them at all).

So Taeyeon was Jessica's ex? I thought she was just a good friend. If I were Jessica, I'd just go back to Taeyeon since it seems that she's better than Tiffany based on what you have revealed so far. But... Jessica seems to be hopelessly in love with Tiffany and is helplessly addicted to her. I pity her so much because her love for Tiffany is so strong that she's willing to experience the pain she had experienced when Yoona was with Tiffany. Besides, you mainly write JeTi and if they won't end up together, I'm guessing Jessica will be just left alone.

I'm sorry if I said too much.

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jorgenzen September 28 2014, 17:08:29 UTC
No, you haven't said too much. Your input is greatly appreciated. I think I remember you from the last chapter ( ... )

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checkinyourbra October 11 2014, 01:08:12 UTC
Haaaayyy bish!!

Guess what?? This is the first fic I've read since the ~news. Andddd YAYYY I still love fic. *hugs LJ; hugs you*

Oh gurl I was angsting away hardcore, then Krystal picking Jessica up was such a fresh breath of air. Bb Jess needed a third party to lay down all these emotions. D: Srsly....I'm like DDDD: right now. But, like her own addiction, she returns to Tiffany. Of all things, they certainly have that in common.

AND THEN THE COP THING. I held my breath!! I gotta admit; that was a delicious turn of events and super realistic hahahhaha. I loved it. xDDD

AND THIS IS FINISHED. Yuuuussss. Trust, you'll get my feedback one I've read it all.

Cheers, love~

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jorgenzen October 11 2014, 12:53:36 UTC
Heyyyyyyyy (hahaha I laugh irl at the bish :3 )

I'm glad you're feeling better about reading fics after Jessica's unfortunate departure (Still sighing but time does heal. It's going to be difficult to imagine listening to the songs and watching videos without her in it) And now, we only have past photos/videos and ofcourse the only source of jeti I'll get is from fiction. That's enough for me, I guess. We'll make do right?

Jessica's addiction towards Tiffany is more of.. like unable to move forward and couldn't get Tiffany out of her flesh. Just like Tiffany with her stuff. Over time, I detest this story. Hahahah

The cop thing.. I was cackling. I wanted to end the story with Jessica turning 180 and call the police on her. Hahahahahahahahahahh!!!!!!! one of two alternative endings. But I was like.. nahh

It's alright. Take your time. No pressure. (Not like I'm any good reader.. I'm slow as hell)

cheers to you lovely

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