i agree with the October 15th Anon about these being poetic. AND YOU SAID YOU DIDN'T WRITE POETRY *twisting your words*
It's so hard to pick favorites. D: But if I must, I'll choose the middle three--heavy bias on 'you're all I hear.' and ' he touches me and i think of you. '
his hands are empty while yours are full of hidden treasures---DIS IMAGERY. Top notch, Jorgieface. <333
nono. this is absolutely not poetry. these are just string of words. nonsense words when i read it again. i think they're a little juvenile. argue no more, pancakes!
but thank you for the picking out favourites. i always like reading what you think of it. ah, thank you beautiful mermaid.
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i personally liked the 'you're all i taste' part. i love your writing :)
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It's so hard to pick favorites. D: But if I must, I'll choose the middle three--heavy bias on 'you're all I hear.' and ' he touches me and i think of you. '
his hands are empty while yours are full of hidden treasures---DIS IMAGERY. Top notch, Jorgieface. <333
Yes, yes. Quite beautiful.
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but thank you for the picking out favourites. i always like reading what you think of it. ah, thank you beautiful mermaid.
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