Lost Memories Part 2

[joryx666]

Tosh brought one of her portable games. "Owen do you want to play a game?"
Everyone else was asleep except Owen.
Owen looks at Tosh. "bit old to be playing games. what are we playing?"
"Well i have a bunch of old games. like Tetris, Packman, those type of games"
"ah retro games,” Owen laughs a little. “I've always loved pac-man though."
Tosh took

Comments

[phantomreviewer]

*is interested*

More?

[joryx666]

*grins*
of course there will be more. Just to let you know this story is super long (ive been working on it for 5 months now) and its very sad.

[phantomreviewer]

Grrr.

Why do people do sad endings?

Super long is good though, I'd recommend putting gaps between the lines, but that's all the speel that I'll spout.

Please let there be some happy?

[joryx666]

well the reason for some of the sad stuff in here is because of my friend. this whole entire story is RP.

Im still working on it. so i dont think this story will ever end. its just one long RP. i know i should put spaces and edit this properly but i already have parts of the story posted on another website and i wasn't getting feedback so im posting it on here