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joryx666

Can it be? Part 5

Jul 31, 2009 02:18

Jack goes up into the coffee shop and takes a seat at the bar. He sits there looking at the stopwatch, not realising Ifan is standing at the counter ( Read more... )

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darkangel86_07 July 31 2009, 06:32:31 UTC

Ohh, I am loving this more and more w/ each chapter!! =)

joryx666 July 31 2009, 06:40:49 UTC

im glad people are reading this. i always feel that when i post stuff no one reads it and i want to stop posting. but wait till next chapter. your gonna love it lots of Jack/Ifan

rupert2bear July 31 2009, 10:45:04 UTC

Loving this. More Ifan and Jack in the next chapter. Can't wait. Hope we don't have to wait too long.

joryx666 July 31 2009, 19:05:08 UTC

Theres definately more Jack/Ifan in the next chapter. I'm trying to edit it as fast as i can

unrequited1984 July 31 2009, 12:20:57 UTC

why do i get the feeling ifan is trying to tell jack something? listen up jack, you may learn something!

love this so far!

joryx666 July 31 2009, 18:56:29 UTC

Im really glad you do. i have most of the next part done. i just have to edit and add stuff