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Fic: An Enduring Fate (6/?)

Feb 05, 2012 03:28

Title: An Enduring Fate (6/?)
Rating: R (NC-17 overall)
Pairings/Characters: Will/Rachel
Spoilers: Follows canon through A Very Glee Christmas; uses ideas from rest of season 2
Disclaimer: All things Glee belong to Ryan Murphy and Fox. I’m just borrowing them.
Summary: They say life is a series of starts and stops. For Will and Rachel, that couldn't be ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, title: an enduring fate, pairing: will/rachel, fic: glee, rating: r

Comments 5

greysgirl1978 February 5 2012, 10:03:23 UTC

This was a really nice chapter to read after your return. I adore Will & Rachel together. They are perfect for each other!!

joshdonnalyman February 17 2012, 03:44:59 UTC

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it and I hope I can get the next chapter up soon. No more six month waits! :)

anonymous February 20 2012, 21:16:19 UTC

I really love this chapter. And the whole story. I just found it and read all 6 chapters in one day. I hope to read more of it soon! I think the pairing is great and you make it work very convincing and realistic.
many greetings!

wistfulwatcher February 25 2012, 03:26:57 UTC

Crafty woman, you waited long enough that I was able to re-read the entire series because I had forgotten enough ;) That being said, I am so glad that I was able to--I absolutely love this story!

So many great things about this update--namely, that it happened. Your portrayal of Mercedes was perfect, and I really love her relationship with Rachel. You do such a great job in this series of weaving in the episodes despite it being an AU, and this chapter was no exception. The exclusion of Jesse was nice without it being obvious, and the Finn bit at the end...duh duh duhhhhh. I especially loved that you changed "Jar of Hearts" to "A Thousand Years," which kept the artist the same--great way to keep it close to the universe of the show, but also AU ( ... )

wistfulwatcher February 25 2012, 03:28:02 UTC

(OK, I was only 200 words over the limit, and I seriously considered shortening it, but I'm lazy, so sorry, but I'm double commenting!)

She shook her head slightly before pulling back and looking up at him. “You give me everything I could ever want,” she said, focusing on his eyes and pleading with him to believe her.

Her desperation to make sure he knows how much she wants to stay with him and keep their relationship going is so powerful here, considering she was hurting so badly just a short time before. I feel like these are strong moments for Rachel in a way, since she decides what she wants most so quickly, and then just toughs out the things that are in her way of that goal. (If that made sense...kinda feels like it didn't, lol.)

He was dancing with the beautiful Quinn Fabray, but his eyes showed hope as they were focused only on the brunette.FIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNN! Go away and don't cause trouble for these two. Just sexytimes and graduation and marriage and babies. No drama, k? In return you may run a mildly successful garage ( ... )