All Forbidden in Love and War [Unfinshed]

[joshuakal]

This is the current story I am writing it in three parts. This is part one I just finished writing, It's likely to be edited and re-drafted at different points. Also I'm open for constructive criticism if you don't like it don't comment unless it is giving me tips on how to improve it.
My punctuation and grammar isn't perfect and I may have

Comments

[weejamielee]

That was good, i liked that :)