You're Mine || Junes, part 2/2

[joshyouare]

Title: You're Mine
Author: joshyouare
Part: 2/2
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Junes
Genre: Smut
Summary: we all want we cannot have.
A/N: con-crit welcome, and appreciated.
Disclaimer: Fiction: not true.

(part one - here.)

Comments

[madd_city]

gorgeous ^^ loved it. loved the dougie bit too ;)
the ending was spectacular XD xx

[joshyouare]

haha the pudd snuck in there, but not intentionally, it emerged when it was beta'd

i wrote it in as Tom
but Jess has issues with Fludd

i rather like it lol

thanks dude! xxx

[superfizz126873]

wow, that was beautiful. I loved the odd relationship between Harry and Danny with the pent up tension.

good work xo

[joshyouare]

thaankyou sweetheart, i wanna make a sequel... or a few, i love these characters, the tention is fun to write :P

Merci xx

[yetwhoami]

I love this, so, so much. I just read both chapters at once and I can just imagine the whole so vividly... which i suppose is slightly worrying :P

But yus. <3

xX Xx

[joshyouare]

haha not worrying at all!
i do it regularly...
even when i'm not reading slash (A)

;3

thankyouuuu
xx

[evolia]

It does feel very temporary...but I guess with them, it's always going to be, in a way, depending the circumstances. In this, it can only be, right? Oh, boys <3.

[joshyouare]

possibly, i like how open ended this is, i'd defiantly like to do a sequel :3

xx

[elisa88]

I'm really late reading this, but I enjoyed reading it.
I like their fucked up relationship.. dunno why but it feels right with them (sorta)
and they're the hottest couple =P

But I seriously like how things happened between them in this part, how it is not weird at all, it just is, and they don't fight it.

=)