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jotsalot

Ninja! {fic}

May 04, 2010 18:41

Ninja!
Author: Ladelle
Pairing: Naru-Sasu-Naru
Genre: Humor, Parody
Summary: In the real world, Naruto tries his darnedest to convince Sasuke that yes, he is indeed a ninja.
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naruto pairing: narusasu, fic

Comments 8

ladygizarme May 5 2010, 04:15:59 UTC

I lol'd all over the place. I love the way you write their friendship/banter/interactions, so sooo much. As I was reading, I kept making mental notes of all these lines I wanted to quote as my favorite. XP In the end, I tried to narrow it down:

looking much like a magician that expected the object behind his hands to turn into something miraculous and unexpected. Like logic.

And every bit of Sasuke's reaction to the kiss just made me asldfjd;adjf!! <3

(lol, ninjas vs. pirates never gets old to me)

jotsalot May 12 2010, 15:53:13 UTC

LOL!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was super fun to write and almost feels like it should be longer...LOL. :DD

I was pretty proud of that line, myself. B) I don't have clever moment soften, hahaha.

<3333

tohru7 May 5 2010, 16:02:41 UTC

this really was awesome, i loved it to bits!!!
naruto was so, so naruto and sasuke...poor guy!
your just so creative and that ending-> epicness^^

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jotsalot May 12 2010, 15:51:07 UTC

Why, hello there. :D

How are you doing? <3

hellodeer May 8 2010, 22:29:23 UTC

LOL! This was hilarious and genius, I loved it <3

jotsalot May 12 2010, 15:51:31 UTC

Thank you! <3

aestover June 15 2010, 17:27:19 UTC

This has "genius" written all over it.

The interaction between the two boys flowed smoothly without a hitch, and I almost bought his (Naruto's) act up until the very end.

...And now I've got to go grocery shopping. I guess I really can't put that off any more now lololol.

jotsalot September 1 2010, 13:24:40 UTC

*sneaks in for a late reply*

Thank you! Naruto was super funny in this. :D I cracked myself up writing it.

Thank you for reading!