Little Cloud

[joyandthunder]

On a sea of wisps, you were
shaped like a tugboat.
I saw you--
small, on the horizon,
a sulky white and
lavender underneath.
Then you were pulled--
made to wisp.
Stretched like arms toward her lover
against the violence of the stratosphere.
I lost you when I caught the bus.

Comments

[danielefton]

I like it - it makes me smile. It's reminiscent of the stuff you are forced to churn out in 6th grade, but the teacher can tell that you are something special, or that your aunt wrote it for you.

LOL

there are some great visualizations in here, and of course, the obligatory gut wrenching ending. Still makes me smile.