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The Trouble with Love Chapter 18

Jul 16, 2010 17:00

Title: The Trouble with Love 17/22
Rating: R
Summary: Because sometimes, not all scars can heal with time.
Spoilers: Up to season 9 is fair game
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: mild violence, adult situation in future chapters.
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Lois looked at Chloe who was still obviously upset as her cousin
looked at the ( Read more... )

chloe, george dean, the trouble with love, connor, oliver, rating: r

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joyblue July 17 2010, 11:21:28 UTC

Thank you! I have to keep on working for more people
to feel different about Oliver!

miss_morrygan July 16 2010, 10:26:19 UTC

it's incredible! amazing job, you've outdone yourself once more!

joyblue July 17 2010, 11:22:29 UTC

Thank you! this was quite hard for me to write, probably
because first draft was written while watching the final game!
hope you like what's coming for Oliver and Chloe!

judyku July 16 2010, 11:13:08 UTC

I can say with complete honesty that Oliver is one seriously selfish jackass!

Chloe was the one who got cheated on, Chloe was the one who got her heart broken, Chloe was the one who had to suffer the fact that another woman was carrying was carrying the child of the man she loved.

Yet all Oliver can think of is himself. I was still that idiot who fucked up, I didn't have a choice, and all the rest.

The bit that really gets me is when he calls Chloe on giving Clark chance after chance, but wouldn't give him a second one. How DARE he?! Seriously, how dare he compare what he did to anything Clark did?

To top it all off, he hates her understanding him? I shake my head.

Don't walk away from him, Chloe. Run. Run as fast you can and leave his head firmly up his ass.

Haven't reacted quite so much to a fic in a long time! Excellent stuff!

joyblue July 17 2010, 11:25:20 UTC

glad that I can make you react like that, and hopefully
Oliver can redeem himself in a way...

mia805 July 16 2010, 12:27:24 UTC

Awesome chapter, great.And the Chloe Oliver interaction was pure gold. I knew he still loved her, but your writing here was just so emotional and perfect. I don't want this fic to end. I can't wait to read more of the story - evil cliffhanger. Besides congratulations for the nominations, you surely deserve it.

joyblue July 17 2010, 11:26:19 UTC

Thank you very much! I had to re-do the
Chloe/Oliver scene a lot until I got there!
more cliffhangers on the way!

you82it July 16 2010, 14:08:28 UTC

wow!!! Every chapter is more.. wow!!!

joyblue July 17 2010, 11:26:48 UTC

Thank you! will try to keep the 'wow' coming!