The Trouble with Love Chapter 21

[joyblue]

Author: Joy Blue
Title: The Trouble with Love 21/22
Rating: R
Summary: Because sometimes, not all scars can heal with time.
Spoilers: Up to season 9 is fair game
Standard Disclaimers Apply
Warning: adult situations.
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“I can’t find them anywhere!” Impulse cried out as he looked through the different doors inside
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Comments

[xfilefan79]

I'm actually strangely relieved that it was just a one night stand and not a 6 month affair (not that it makes it right), and I'm sure his explantion for lying to her made perfect sense when it's translateed into Man logic, even though it doesn't to most other people.

I get that he says he doesn't deserve her even though he still loves her, but I think he shouldn't give up without at least attempting to fight for her, I felt like yelling 'come on man grow a back bone'.

I'm really looking forward to the end.

[joyblue]

He should grow a backbone! and hope you like what's
next!

[brittany2922]

Okay I am so excited to see how this ends, but I'm kinda scared that there won't be a happy Chlollie ending.

This chapter was so awesome I was glad to read that Oliver didn't have an ongoing affair with Sandra and it was just a one time thing.

Awesome Job!

[joyblue]

Thank you, and I hope you like the final chapter!

[modscho]

Awesome chapter!

I really liked their conversation and I'm kind of happy that the affair with Sandra was a one night stand only. That doesn't change the fact that he betrayed Chloe's love and her trust in him and that's why I still vote for more than just an apology. Though this one was very honest and probably more than he'd said in different circumstances.
I don't hate Ollie though, no ones really knows what the torture did to him, so I try to see his side. They both love eachother so there's still hope, right? My little Chlollieheart couldn't stand anything else but a happy end *hint hint*

[joyblue]

There's always hope :)

Thanks for the comment and hope you enjoy the
finale!

[joyblue]

Thank you! They may or may not end up together...
see last chapter!

[abarbiestory]

even if it is years later, I'm happy that Ollie was FINALLY truthful with her. He's a silly goose who should of told her sooner because i think that she would of forgave him after a while, not 8 years!!!

I can't wait for the next chapter! i hope that they can be good friends at least.Good news i don't hate Ollie anymire. I feel like he has paid for his mistake, and if were honest at least he didn't kill anymore ppl! not that i like that he cheated but it could have been worst!!

great job can't wait for more!

[joyblue]

Thank you! and that apology was years too late, and
let's just hope his next actions won't take another
8 years :)