The Trouble with Love Chapter 4

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The Trouble with Love  4/?

Chloe read through her inbox to see if there was anything that needed urgent attention as she sipped her coffee.

“This is new...” Chloe muttered. “Nothing seems to be happening...”

“How’s my favourite cousin today?”

“And I spoke to soon. Hello, Lois.”

Lois Lane grinned as she sat on the edge of the desk and

Comments

[maud26]

I just lovehow smitten Chloe and Connor are with each other. Chloe's right she can't blame a little boy for something his dad did years ago.

I'd love to see more of Chloe and Oliver alone to see more of their interactions with each other. Chloe is playing nice when Connor's around but once she's alone with Oliver I'd like to see how she'd react.

Can't wait for another chapter.

[joyblue]

The Chloe/Oliver will be here shortly :) Thanks for reading!

[xfilefan79]

I have to say I love that Connor & Chloe are so close, and that she isn't blaming him for Oliver's actions, it's more than most people would do.

Ok you achieved what I thought would be impossible in this fic you actually had me feeling for Ollie there for a while he really suffered in Apokolips, but instead of talking to Chloe about his nightmares he turns to another woman, on a scale of 1 -10 of bad decisions that's a 100.

I think his feelings for Chloe are still there and probably as strong as ever, but he doesn't think he's worthy of her, which let's face it right now he isn't, but I have faith you can get him to a place where he will be again.

I too would love to see how Chloe & Oliver interact without Connor there as a buffer.

[joyblue]

Haha! Mission accomplished! There would be more on what's going on
in Oliver's mind soon. There will be Chloe/Oliver scenes, just hang on please!
Thanks for reading!

[renka23]

I have hope that your writing can turn Oliver around... Make him a little more likable. And I absolutely adore Connor and Chloe's bond! :) She's right it's not the kid's fault. It's OLLIE's. But, anyway, let's how this all goes. More power! :))

[joyblue]

Thank you! Connor's pretty fun to write. Hope you'll enjoy the
next chapter!

[alltuesday]

Oh my gosh update please.

On to a more meaningful comment... I'm glad to finally get a glimpse of what happened with Ollie. Chloe and Connor are so cute. I also enjoyed the Chlo-Lo part.

[joyblue]

Thanks! Lois was fun to write. More Connor and Chloe soon!

[joyblue]

Thank you so much!

His 'relationship' with Sandra will be explored, but not for a few more
chapters.

It's going to be interesting to have the George/Chloe/Oliver dynamic soon!