Brigit's Flame: January, Week 1

[joyciel]

Prompt: Tragically Hip

I wasn't feeling too inspired but thought I should at least write something to get me out of a sort of funk I'm having. Bleh.

Title: Untitled (no, that's the title)

Comments

[blythe025]

Great job. If this was you in a funk, you must be fabulous when you're feeling it. :)

[missflyer]

I like how you captured Teresa's activities spiraling out of control, and juxtaposed that with her briefly coming out of it because of Beth's words, only to dismiss it again. I could see the style (of the action/expressing) here reflecting how Teresa sees her life -- in bits and pieces, remembering the 'important' stuff and ignoring all the rest. Nice job!