Worse [Raven; LJ Idol season 9, week 11]

[joyfulfeather]

Four new cuts, none of them deep enough to need stitches. Bruised ribs. Sprained wrist. Dani treated all of Allison's new wounds with care, then checked the older ones. The deep slice on her back, with stitches which Allison had somehow managed not to tear this time. The bullet graze on her left forearm. The rope burns on her throat and hand. Dani

Comments

[roina_arwen]

Great characters - I'm enjoying this series. :)

[n3m3sis43]

I'm intrigued by this 'verse, and the dialogue between Dani and Allison was so natural. Very nice. :)

[jem0000000]

I like how they work together, and find solutions, rather than letting their disagreements get out of hand.

[eternal_ot]

It fits the prompt well... I liked this take..:) Good work ...of course would love to read more that is to come.:)

[sinnamongirl]

I like it! I've got a friend or two who are really uninterested in superhero backstories/backgrounds, like the only thing matters is their superness, but I like that stuff myself, so I really appreciate this is a quiet snapshot of behind the scenes action. It helps me see the hero as a full person, not just an archetype.