Comments | joyfulgirl41: Supernatural FIC: give or take the subject or the verb

joyfulgirl41

Supernatural FIC: give or take the subject or the verb

Apr 30, 2006 10:51

(Originally posted yesterday over at JJ's bday_princess comm here, but I'm reposting here because I'm all anal and OCD like that...)

Title: give or take the subject or the verb
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: ADULT (WINCEST)
Summary: Dean and Sam have to explore their feelings in order to solve the case.

Notes: For my favoritest princess on the occasion of her ( Read more... )

wincest, supernatural fic

Comments 86

cmere May 14 2007, 04:12:50 UTC

This is fantastic! Funny and really deeply meaningful at the same time. I love the way you wrote the boys.

rejeneration May 26 2007, 05:52:35 UTC

Holy dear Lord! Wow. Not only unbelievably, and can I get an amen on this one, HOT... no, really. Hot in some crazy sort of ... whew... kind of way. But the voices!!! The voices win! So much Sam as Sam and Sam as Dean and Dean as Dean and Dean as Sam! You've just killed me. It's all so good I'm sorta flailing on the inside and I don't typically flail!!! I don't typically use all these !'s either, but... that's what you've reduced me to!

Wow. I wish I had more brilliant insight to share, but you've sucked my brain dry with all the goodness here. Just really, really, phenomenal writing. Wow!!11eleventy-one!

*g* chavelaprincess June 18 2007, 09:29:53 UTC

So perfect!
"You," Sam whispers before he can stop himself.

"Oh, Sam." Dean's hand is unbelievably hot as it slips under the elastic of Sam's boxers and wraps around his cock. "That you always had."

*guh*

I freaking adore this one so much! Mainly any interaction between them is awesome, but when it is so well written and played out this great, that is even better!

Re: *g* elektrik_storm June 26 2007, 00:05:33 UTC

fancy seeing you here! reading naughty fic are we? *giggles*

seriously, that fic is so hot!

Re: *g* chavelaprincess June 26 2007, 00:37:28 UTC

LOL!!!!! You're so freaking... LOL!
I fucking love you man! LOL!

Where else would I be but reading them in all thier sexy glory!!!!

Ugh! And it is all your and Sirena's fault! Which make me love you two so much damn more, making think 09' is way fucking better than 10' so I can tackle you! *glomps*

Re: *g* elektrik_storm June 26 2007, 10:04:01 UTC

:P sounds like a grand idea! i love your dean icon! *sigh*

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elektrik_storm June 26 2007, 00:04:52 UTC

loved it loved it loved it! hope you don't mind me friending you! :P

dodificus July 10 2007, 04:34:12 UTC

And it really is different in Dean's body. This response, because a sense of completeness blooms in his chest at the thought that they're in this together. Here together, finally, his body says.

This is a really interesting take on the usual body swap stories. The idea that a body might have ingrown physical/chemical responses to situations that are totally independant of whose mind is in control. And the fact that even though Sam was used to feeling the urge to flee in his own body he couldn't explain exactly what it was he was so afraid of.

Dean's head snaps up, like he's just realized what he said. "I mean. I know, now. I feel like I just. Like I need to get out of here." The expression on his face is completely unreadable. "What the hell are you so afraid of?"

Sam rubs his hand over his face, surprised to find stubble, and says, "I wish I knew."

That's scary and true, we don't always know why we feel a lot of the things that we feel.

Plus, I *loved* the ending

"What do you want ( ... )