Supernatural FIC: give or take the subject or the verb

[joyfulgirl41]

(Originally posted yesterday over at JJ's bday_princess comm here, but I'm reposting here because I'm all anal and OCD like that...)

Title: give or take the subject or the verb
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: ADULT (WINCEST)
Summary: Dean and Sam have to explore their feelings in order to solve the case.

Notes: For my favoritest princess on the occasion of her

Comments

[sacrilicious]

Didn't know how to apologize, or tell Dean that it wasn't him that Sam was leaving.

Oh Sammy Sammy Sammy, ever though of just saying it? Boys.

If she's really looking to get into Sam's pants, she's going to have to work for it.

Hehe, love this line!

There's only one copy of that picture, and Sam has it. Clearly they've switched bodies somehow.

So matter of fact. So DEAN. You've got both their voices down perfectly.

She's still topless, which Dean appreciates.

Yup, defintely Dean LOL.

"Fight or flight," Sam mutters.
"Well we know which one you pick."
And Sam feels that like a sucker punch, because it's true.

Ouch. Great line.

"You wanna fuck me, don't you?" Sam straightens and flexes his shoulders back. Rolls his head to the side and smiles. "You totally want to fuck me."

Oh god. ::Dies:: I can totally see this in my head and it's HILARIOUS.

The end was a serious awwwwww moment, mixed in with YAY porn! Love this story!

[lea_ndra]

this is the best bodyswap concept I've read so far.

the plot worked out fine - I really liked the "be careful what you wish for" concept, and it hilariously funny and hot.

thanks!

[lamis_p]

I loved this.

There's only one copy of that picture, and Sam has it. Clearly they've switched bodies somehow. This is my favorite bit. I love how Dean just works it out so quickly; he is expecting anything to happen at anytime.

I also loved the idea that emotions are controlled by biology and Sam’s anxiety is apart of him physically.

[miss_begonia]

Good god, this is PERFECT. The funny and the realism and the unbelievable hot, all tied up in a deliciously well-written package. Awesome.

[brown_betty]

Ha! I laughed so hard at the first half of this, I don't think I really stopped laughing at any point from the swap to the sex. Brilliant.